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10 thoughts on “Devils Halo

  1. says:

    Rik and Lars are identical twins and lovers in secret They are both in love with Dion Fieri the composer of their band Devil’s Halo The feeling is mutual though neither of them acted on the attraction before Dion is tired seeing th

  2. says:

    The twins pick up random tricks and always date the same person so its always a three way This keeps people from suspecting they're sexual together Lol yeah seriouslt? no one ever suspected they incestuous? Real

  3. says:

    I liked this story what there was of it because it just seemed like this was just one piece of a full length book IMO this

  4. says:

    I just can't do the twincest thing and threesomes also not my thing I should have read the blurb for this one

  5. says:

    It was kind of an interesting idea that was well executed and well told One of the twins was a little too weepy for me The ending had no definite resolution just a HFNPoor grammar and spelling are pet peeves of mine It drives me crazy when someone is sloppy especially when an author says she is a former grammar teacherCommon error number one Just because a compound word exists does not mean it should be used in all situations What that m

  6. says:

    Offered FREE from the MM Romance Group Love Is Always Write Volume Three

  7. says:

    The story line is decent Rik and Lars relationship in the story is not my cuppa tea If they would have been steps I would've liked the story I was frustrated with the serious lack of communication between the characters and the ending felt unfinished It was way too abrupt and unclear I'm usually a fan of Lee's work but this one just didn't do it for meAdult read

  8. says:

    I started this story with some trepidation I have never been comfortable with twincest or any other form of sibling romantic

  9. says:

    I really enjoyed this for a short story I would like to read from this author but all I see are novellas or short stories I'll keep looking and hoping for a novel length book as I think this author has the ability to create

  10. says:

    Free LiaW storyBarely a HFN ending

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The MM Romance Group's Love is Always Write event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short storyRead the story here or find it in Love Is Always Write Volume. I started this story with some trepidation I have never been comfortable with twincest or any other form of sibling romantic love Regardless I began the story and I m glad I did I think the author did and excellent job of making twincest seem believable Thank you

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Dear AuthorThe Sanders twins have been my band mates for years but I've never seen them really happy not when we signed our first record deal not when we won our first Grammy and not when either of them had a boyfriend Lately when they think I'm not seeing them they look at me and I fe. The twins pick up random tricks and always date the same person so its always a three way This keeps people from suspecting they re sexual together Lol yeah seriouslt no one ever suspected they incestuous Really They always hook up with one random trick for one night only and no one suspects I hate when they like how did he not know we wanted him Well maybe cause you re piling up tricks everynight Oh but they gave him the look And giving him a look as they prance off with their trick doesn t scream we want you IMO and they miss how he doesn t look at them with lust in his eyes like he did before Kim Well why not make a move back then The twins seem like arrogant idiots For a story under 7000 words this sure is repetitive We ve read how the band started twice now Read how Kim wanted to take the music darker twice now And then the dialogue is so stupid It s like they aren t even talking to each other I can t remember names Can t even tell the characters apart The guy says one thing about how he doesn t do one night stands And twins think how they wish for than one night sand but other guy stubborn Completely disregarding the previous conversation He threw a glass and cut other guys head open Head wounds bleed a lot but no mention of that as they start having sex Skin split and warm blood seeped down his face but he ignored it stepping forward as a crying Lars sank to his kneesHe just ignores it and they starts sexing and making out and chewing in lips How is him sitting there seeping blood over his face while the twins maul him sexySo sluttier twin lubes guys cock Rolls condom on Then sits on it with a grimace No lube on the condom or prepping his hole Unless hes just always lubed and ready to go in that free access to all asshole I think the condom would slide of no names dick and get lost in slutts gapin manhole Love when the other twin stares into his blood soaked eyes and watches the blood gush It doesn t describe it graphically but the reader knows he has a seeping head wound because slutty twin also a drama ueen and throws dishes I m glad the twins never cared enough to check his gushing head wound Or you know apologize for causing it But are they really going to let him on the plane with an untreated dripping head wound This felt really really rushed An in a story under 7000 words I really don t think I should be reading the exact same descriptions and details than once I got the feeling reading this that the author really just didn t care Like they couldn t be bothered to even reread the short story they just wrote That s just the impression the story left me with

Read ✓ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF ↠ Lee Brazil

El things I thought I'd never feel again I want them to be happy forever with mePS there must be twincest and no cheating involved otherwise be my guestPhoto Description Two identical handsome young blond men sitting one with his arms around the otherThis story was written as a part of. I just can t do the twincest thing and threesomes also not my thing I should have read the blurb for this one